October 21,

  The Clients; Bridget and Cindy came in and we showed them our first rough cut.  I edited it to be fifteen seconds.  It has audio and I am in the process if putting in the graphics.  The critique I received from them was
-Have a more spooky into Christmas audio.
-Bring in a hashtag
-Message
-Logo, all in this order.
  Afterwards, Ed Cheetham came in and critiqued my piece and gave me advice on how to make a logo animation with their logo.  Him, Lisa, and I came to a conclusion to have it simple.  There would be the message in white letters, the letters would expand into a white background, and the logo will come on.
  This is my rough cut.  I am going to continue editing my new audio, work on the graphics, and the way the camera blurs at the end.